My Whakapapa Story.

I drew my Grandpa because he passed away in 2004 but my nana is still alive. My dad is with my grandma. This is my uncle who went to live in America, and my aunty who is in Hamilton. My cousin is with my aunty. She looks after her in Hamilton. My dad's aunty that's also in the picture and my dad's cousin is there too. I drew him yellow because he died after dad's aunty, and the blue koru is my dad's sister who died the same year as my dad's brother. I have a big family and we all look after one another.

 

 

My Trip To The Beach

Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when We can describe  using our five senses.

In the weekend my family and I went to the beach.
I went for a swim because it was hot. The water was warm. The sand was hot. The waves splashed on the sand.  I picked up a jelly fish and it was slimy in my hands. We had delicious lunch. The sausages were tasted like pork. 
We all had fun at the beach.
                                                       By Feao

All About Me

All About

Trip To The Movie

Learning intention: I am learning to write about an experience.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can

• write an orientation
• write what I did in order
• write how I feel

During the holidays I went to the movies with my family.
We watched a cartoon movie. I like that movie because the girl in the movie is pretty. My favourite movie is Ariel the mermaid.
Everyone enjoyed the movie.
                                                 By Feao

At Playtime

Learning intention: I am learning to write about an experience.

At playtime I raced with my friends at the field. Joyla came first. Laura came second. I came last.
We had a great time.
                                            By Feao