Wednesday 27 September 2017

Trip To The Movie

Learning intention: I am learning to write about an experience.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can

  • write an orientation
  • write what I did in order
  • write how I feel

During the holidays I went to the movies with my family.
We watched a cartoon movie. I like that movie because the girl in the movie is pretty. My favourite movie is Ariel the mermaid.
Everyone enjoyed the movie.
                                                 By Feao

1 comment:

  1. Great writing Fe'ao. Spending time with family is a great way to spend the holidays.

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