Wednesday, 21 March 2018

My Trip To The Beach

Learning goalWe are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when We can describe  using our five senses.

In the weekend my family and I went to the beach.
I went for a swim because it was hot. The water was warm. The sand was hot. The waves splashed on the sand.  I picked up a jelly fish and it was slimy in my hands. We had delicious lunch. The sausages were tasted like pork. 
We all had fun at the beach.
                                                       By Feao

Saturday, 10 February 2018

Describe Popcorn

Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when We can describe popcorn using our five senses.

I love popcorn. It tastes buttery and salty. It smells delicious and buttery. It looks white and yellow. When I eat warm popcorn it crunches in my mouth like drie leaves.
                                                                 Fe'ao
                                                          

Wednesday, 27 September 2017

Trip To The Movie

Learning intention: I am learning to write about an experience.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can

  • write an orientation
  • write what I did in order
  • write how I feel

During the holidays I went to the movies with my family.
We watched a cartoon movie. I like that movie because the girl in the movie is pretty. My favourite movie is Ariel the mermaid.
Everyone enjoyed the movie.
                                                 By Feao

At Playtime

Learning intention: I am learning to write about an experience.

At playtime I raced with my friends at the field. Joyla came first. Laura came second. I came last.
We had a great time.
                                            By Feao