Wednesday, 21 March 2018

My Trip To The Beach

Learning goalWe are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when We can describe  using our five senses.

In the weekend my family and I went to the beach.
I went for a swim because it was hot. The water was warm. The sand was hot. The waves splashed on the sand.  I picked up a jelly fish and it was slimy in my hands. We had delicious lunch. The sausages were tasted like pork. 
We all had fun at the beach.
                                                       By Feao

1 comment:

  1. Hi there Feao, thank you for sharing your descriptive text to your blog. I enjoyed reading about your family trip to the beach. Your use of interesting descriptive words is fantastic. I could almost feel that slimy jellyfish in my hands. Well done!

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