Success criteria: We can do this when We can describe using our five senses.
In the weekend my family and I went to the beach.
I went for a swim because it was hot. The water was warm. The sand was hot. The waves splashed on the sand. I picked up a jelly fish and it was slimy in my hands. We had delicious lunch. The sausages were tasted like pork.
We all had fun at the beach.
By Feao
Hi there Feao, thank you for sharing your descriptive text to your blog. I enjoyed reading about your family trip to the beach. Your use of interesting descriptive words is fantastic. I could almost feel that slimy jellyfish in my hands. Well done!
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