Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when We can describe popcorn using our five senses.
I love popcorn. It tastes buttery and salty. It smells delicious and buttery. It looks white and yellow. When I eat warm popcorn it crunches in my mouth like drie leaves.
Fe'ao
I am a Year 5 student at Saint Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 6 and my teacher is Mrs Agnew.
Saturday, 10 February 2018
Wednesday, 7 February 2018
Wednesday, 27 September 2017
Trip To The Movie
Learning intention: I am learning to write about an experience.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can
During the holidays I went to the movies with my family.
We watched a cartoon movie. I like that movie because the girl in the movie is pretty. My favourite movie is Ariel the mermaid.
Everyone enjoyed the movie.
By Feao
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can
- write an orientation
- write what I did in order
- write how I feel
During the holidays I went to the movies with my family.
We watched a cartoon movie. I like that movie because the girl in the movie is pretty. My favourite movie is Ariel the mermaid.
Everyone enjoyed the movie.
By Feao
At Playtime
Learning intention: I am learning to write about an experience.
At playtime I raced with my friends at the field. Joyla came first. Laura came second. I came last.
We had a great time.
By Feao
At playtime I raced with my friends at the field. Joyla came first. Laura came second. I came last.
We had a great time.
By Feao
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