Saturday, 10 February 2018

Describe Popcorn

Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when We can describe popcorn using our five senses.

I love popcorn. It tastes buttery and salty. It smells delicious and buttery. It looks white and yellow. When I eat warm popcorn it crunches in my mouth like drie leaves.
                                                                 Fe'ao
                                                          

Wednesday, 27 September 2017

Trip To The Movie

Learning intention: I am learning to write about an experience.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can

  • write an orientation
  • write what I did in order
  • write how I feel

During the holidays I went to the movies with my family.
We watched a cartoon movie. I like that movie because the girl in the movie is pretty. My favourite movie is Ariel the mermaid.
Everyone enjoyed the movie.
                                                 By Feao

At Playtime

Learning intention: I am learning to write about an experience.

At playtime I raced with my friends at the field. Joyla came first. Laura came second. I came last.
We had a great time.
                                            By Feao