Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when We can describe using our five senses.
In the weekend my family and I went to the beach.
I went for a swim because it was hot. The water was warm. The sand was hot. The waves splashed on the sand. I picked up a jelly fish and it was slimy in my hands. We had delicious lunch. The sausages were tasted like pork.
We all had fun at the beach.
By Feao
Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when We can describe popcorn using our five senses.
I love popcorn. It tastes buttery and salty. It smells delicious and buttery. It looks white and yellow. When I eat warm popcorn it crunches in my mouth like drie leaves.
Fe'ao
All About
Learning intention: I am learning to write about an experience.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can
- write an orientation
- write what I did in order
- write how I feel
During the holidays I went to the movies with my family.
We watched a cartoon movie. I like that movie because the girl in the movie is pretty. My favourite movie is Ariel the mermaid.
Everyone enjoyed the movie.
By Feao
Learning intention: I am learning to write about an experience.
At playtime I raced with my friends at the field. Joyla came first. Laura came second. I came last.
We had a great time.
By Feao
